Write a paragraph of at least six sentences writing the next page as if you were the author. Start with page 87, write complete sentences what happens now after Gower woke up, make it interesting, fun, and fit the rest of the story. You will be able to comment on each others blogs later this week, so remember, others will be reading your story too.
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jonny
12/13/2010 02:46:26 am
Gower wakes up and sees able they both say hi then Able says "would you like to be my friend." Gower says "I'd love to." Able says "Ok lets go to my house." Gower says
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Christon
12/13/2010 02:48:47 am
After Abel woke up he was drunk and then he saw a frog walk up and then the frog ploped down and lay there then Abel got up went over to the frog and then the frog tolled Abel that his name is Grower and then Abel tolled him his name and how he got here and about his family. I think Abel is going to get off the island by riding the frog across and then he will say thank you to the frog for helping him.
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brooklynn
12/13/2010 02:48:53 am
As Gower woke up he started talking to Abel and Abel was half asleep so he really was just saying yeah there and okay there.Later that day Abel and Gower went looking for some more food but only for a little while because it was a little windy.As Abel was trying to take a nap when he got back he tried to send some more mind messages to Amanda since he was finished with his book.Abel got tired of trying and finally just gave up and told his self how stupid he was for trying to send mind messages.Then Abel begin to think what if Gower was trying to tell him a way out.Abel raced to see Gower.He was gone.Will he ever see Gower and find a way out?
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Kennedy
12/13/2010 02:49:22 am
After Gower woke up he was really drunk he didn't know where he was. He turned around and started freaking out and then he saw Abel and he new where he was.I think that Abel and Gower will become good friends. I also think that Abel will give Gower a bunch of wine to drink and Gower will be even more drunk. I think in the next chapter Abel will let Gower live with him.
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Hayleigh
12/13/2010 02:49:51 am
Now that Abel has a friend I think that Gower and Abel will work together to find a way home. I think Abel will be a good friend and let Gower come stay with him until he finds his own place. I think that Abel and Gower will build a boat together to get back home. Maybe Gower and Abel will brainstorm to find a way back over the waterfall. I think that they will pray together and God will bless them with a miracle. I think Abel and Gower will get back over the waterfall and return home safely.
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Gabby
12/13/2010 02:52:01 am
The next morning Abel woke up to find Gower sitting next to him."what are you doing?" asked Abel.Gower just sat there like a dead fly until after a couple minutes he said something."I was watching you sleep",gower admitted."wh wh wh why?".Gower stood up thinking of an explanation after a couple second gower snapped his fingers."why....I was protecting you of course!" gower said"I mean what are friends for any way"ggower had a big smile.All of a sudden Abel had a warm and fuzzy feeling inside him Abel suspected it was the joy of having a friend!Abel walked over to Gower and paused....then Abel gave Gower a great big bear hug."How about we go find some grub said Gower.Abel smiled with a nod.
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Katie J.
12/13/2010 02:52:49 am
Gower woke up "Who are you?" Gower demanded. "I`m-" Abel was cut off. "Oh, it`s you." Gower said. "Why are you here?" Gower asked. "I got here unwillingly." said Abel sadly.
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Claire
12/13/2010 02:54:07 am
Abel started to call Gower a friend. Finally Abel wasen't lonely anymore he had a freind. Then one day Gower ran into Amanda the statue, and asked''Who is this?''Abel was embarassed to tell him that was his wife so Abel replied ''Oh I was just bored so I made this women.''Gower said well she is so beautiful, and Abel said,''Hey she is mine by accident, and Gower said,''What was that,''and Abel said oh nothing. Then they fell asleep againest the tree.
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Stephen
12/13/2010 02:55:00 am
After the Gower woke up Able and gower introduced there selfs. Gower asked if there were any post offices,a town, or any boats and Able says no theres only me. Then Gower tells his story about how he got there. then Abel gets Gower drunk iwth his homemade wine. then Gower passes out. I think in the next chapter Abel will get ready to go home to see his wife.
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Ja'Ron
12/13/2010 02:57:45 am
So after Gower woke up him and Abel went to learned about each other. After that they went to Able's book and read for a little while. Then Gower said, " What does that word say?" And Abel said," Don't you know how to read?" Then there was a moment of silence and Gower said," I should really get going, I have work to do."
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Noah
12/13/2010 03:04:41 am
Gower woke up and saw that Abel was in his home and he wanted a friend so Gower is going to go and help Abel go home to Amanda, family , and friends. So now Abel don't have to talk to himself he can talk to Gower and I bet that now Abel is feeling good that he is not all alone no more.
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Myles
12/13/2010 03:07:46 am
Gower stayed the night then when he woke up and was confused. So Abel tells Gower where they are. Gower wants to explor the island so Abel comes with. Abel asks Gower how to get off the island. Gower thinks of a way to get off. He said he didn't know how ,Abel was disapointed.
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Andrew T.
12/13/2010 03:22:00 am
When Gower and abel would wake up and Gower would say Who? What? where am I? Abel would think it was funny. They would be friends and a few months later they would get off the island and then become pen pals. Then tall the story to their kids the story would keep go on and on.
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Zackery D.
12/13/2010 03:24:19 am
When Gower woke up he asked were he was. Then Abel answered "You are on an island". After that they started talking, and they started to like each other. Gower introduced himself and then so did Abel. Then Gower asked if they were in a town, if there was a post office, and he said if there were any boats. Abel replied that it was just him. After that Abel led Gower to his house. He gave Gower some wine and Gower said "Oh I needed that" then gower fell asleep again. Then Abel woke up Gower and Gower asked where he all over again.
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