Jay Berry is a funny kid. He once fell in a well, wants to live in a tree someday, and had a crazy dream about the Old Man in the Woods. Write about the main character Jay, and describe him, what he is like, how he feels about things, and decide if you like him or not and tell why. Write in complete sentences.
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jessi
9/27/2010 03:34:55 am
Jay is a funny kid he really wants to catch those monkeys.I think its kinda weird that someday he wants to live in a tree.I thought that when Jay fell in a well it was funny.I think that hes crazy for trying to catch those monkeys but i do believe that he will catch those monkeys someday.He fills mad when Daisy and his mom laughs at him.He is mad at the monkeys for a lot of things.I like Jay because he is funny he fell in a well and i like his dog.
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Jonny
9/27/2010 03:45:31 am
Jay is cool to me he hunts and skins animals. I think he is smart for trying all his ways to catch those monkeys. I think he will catch the monkeys someday with a fishing pole and have an apple as bait and make the monkeys follow him.
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Hayleigh
9/27/2010 03:49:29 am
Jay has long brown hair a sister a mom and dad he has a dog and he has a lot of farm animals. He is very angry when he can't catch the monkeys. He feels angry about a lot of things because his mom and his sister laugh at him all the time and he is relieved when his dad comes in and stops them from laughing at Jay. I like Jay because he is a nice character he is funny and he is anxious about catching the monkeys.
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~Taylor~
9/27/2010 03:52:31 am
I like Jay because hes funny. He is a nice boy. He likes to kill and skin animals. Jay is afraid of storms. He is also nice to his sister.
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Claire
9/27/2010 03:52:49 am
The three man characters are grandpa, Jay Berry and Jimbo.Jay Berry is funny and a very weird sometimes but his heart is in the right place.He tries to help his sister and he is a good brother and he will do anything for Daisy.But he does get irratated with Mama and Daisy sometimes when they laugh at him.I like Jay Berry a lot he tries and I beleive he is going to catch those monkeys because luck can be unexcpected any time.
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Katie
9/27/2010 03:53:10 am
Jay is very superstituous, he is scared of the Old man in the Mountians because he thinks that he is some sort of spirit and beleives that when he points his stick at anything it will either have bad luck or good luck.When Jay is hunting with Rowdy I think that story becomes much more interesting.Jay really wants a 22. and a pony and I think he deserves it because he does a lot of work. Jay loves his family too. I really like his charecter. I like
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I think that that was funny when Jay fell in the well. Jay likes to hide stuff from Daisy because he thinks that she will laugh at him. I like how Jay and his grandpa make a bunch of stuff to catch the monkeys. Jay feels happy about alot of things. My favorite part of what happened to Jay was when he lost his britches from the monkeys when he drank all that sour mash and got drunk.
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Noah
9/27/2010 03:57:23 am
Well Jay Berry is a awsome kid he is so into hunting and fishing he is sort of like me we both like the same things and it would be pretty cool to live in a tree,but not naked that would be weird to see a kid naked in the woods sleeping on a big tree,and he has a very sweet nice sister who likes to mess with him but she loves him very much and he loves her very much too.He has a very cool dog and a cool name to(by the way his name is Rowdy).His parents and his grand parents love him to but he does not like girls yet.I think Jay Berry is a cool kid and has a nice life.
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bryson
9/27/2010 03:57:33 am
Jay is a cool kid becouse i like to do things like him me and Jay like to hunt.Jay is 14 years old he has brown hair.Jay likes to go hunting and likes to do and thing out side.Jay fells kinda sad becouse his sisters leg is crippled.I like jay becouse i like to do things out side but have never went hunting for a Ratcoon before I went deer hunting and Squrriel hunting and rabbit but thats all the hunting i ever did. I think Jay will get a doctor for his sister when he gets the money for the monkeys and get her leg fixed.
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Christon
9/27/2010 03:58:39 am
Jay berry is a funny kid,he once fell in a well,he also wants to live in a tree down in the bottoms.He had a dream about the old man of the mountains,he dreamed that he was lost out in the bottoms and it was pitch dark out and rowdy and him were trying to find their way home but they got tired and weak and fell asleep under a white oak tree.Jay feels that he can do whatever he wants to do.I like jay ,because he is weird and funny.
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Stephen
9/27/2010 04:02:42 am
Jay is a funny kid thinking he can live in the woods without cloths and no food living off the land wow.I don't think it was right of his mom to laugh at him because he wanted them to stop.I would discribe him as open minded and weird.
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Zackery
9/28/2010 04:06:04 am
I like the character Jay because he hunts and skins animals. He has a dad a mom a sister and a dog. Jay cares about important things and is sometimes weird at what he does. I think of jay as very fun kid with a lot of imagination.
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